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Sitting straight,
Perched on her seat,
STILL AS STONE.
Hair, hazel like bark
And eyes,
Eyes that eternity could lose itself in.
The bullied,
The poor,
The hurt,
Surround the streets.
She knows they are there
But she stares forward,
STILL AS STONE.
They cry out in pain
She pretends not to hear.
She stares forward,
STILL AS STONE.
Her lips, Like the sweet rose petals
Beg her to speak out.
But she does not speak.
She stares forward,
STILL AS STONE.

She must not see
She must not hear
She must not speak

That is what she is supposed to do,
That is what she will do.

Society.
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Okay, old poetry again. I was bullied into submitting it.. etc.
Based on my conception of Society. Ugh.

Old Poetry Piece 3#

Keep Reading,

xxI-am-a-pyramidxx

P.S. Sorry for the formatting and grammar issues. I'm sort of sick and this is how it was written originally. I didn't change it, even though it was wrong at some points...

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I am a pyramid with a crack at the base, any more pressure, and I will break.
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~dontcry4it:icondontcry4it: Jun 3, 2008, 9:37:43 AM
nice,
"Her lips, Like the sweet rose petals
Beg her to speak out."
loved that line :D

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You tell yourself never to mess it up again
still somehow, you always do
you'll keep being hurt
and you'll be the one lying on the floor
crying, once again
~I-am-a-pyramid:iconI-am-a-pyramid: Jun 3, 2008, 2:40:09 PM Mood: Eager
Thank you...

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Ci sono persone che nascono per sognare... altre nascono per essere sognate...
Io sono nata per sognare, e tu per essere il mio sogno. Rubato da: Blagozahath
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xxClaudesxx
~free-hug-king:iconfree-hug-king: Jun 4, 2008, 5:18:58 PM
I love the personification of the whole thing, and how you almost don't expect the end.
between whispers and shouts, this is a scary but true emotional ride through..well..ourselves,

heartbreaking, but true, this is really good

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Two out of every pair of people
need a hug at least seven times a week...

Don't go unhugged.
Take a free hug from someone today.
~I-am-a-pyramid:iconI-am-a-pyramid: Jun 5, 2008, 1:40:56 PM
Yes, I wrote this a while ago. I was kind of depressed with my school's well, society-life. The way some people act like they don't see some things even though they do... how some people see other people getting hurt but don't speak out for well, some pretty reasons...

Glad you like it : )

xxI-am-a-pyramidxx

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Ci sono persone che nascono per sognare... altre nascono per essere sognate...
Io sono nata per sognare, e tu per essere il mio sogno. Rubato da: Blagozahath
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xxClaudesxx
~I-am-a-pyramid:iconI-am-a-pyramid: Jun 5, 2008, 1:49:31 PM
Thank you, it was one pf my favorites too...

Keep Writing,

xxI-am-a-pyramidxx

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Ci sono persone che nascono per sognare... altre nascono per essere sognate...
Io sono nata per sognare, e tu per essere il mio sogno. Rubato da: Blagozahath
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xxClaudesxx
~free-hug-king:iconfree-hug-king: Jun 5, 2008, 5:17:38 PM
yes, I think it's easier to match to society in a school or a large business...

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Two out of every pair of people
need a hug at least seven times a week...

Don't go unhugged.
Take a free hug from someone today.
~I-am-a-pyramid:iconI-am-a-pyramid: Jun 5, 2008, 6:23:08 PM
thanx...

Keep Writing,

xxI-am-a-pyramidxx

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Ci sono persone che nascono per sognare... altre nascono per essere sognate...
Io sono nata per sognare, e tu per essere il mio sogno. Rubato da: Blagozahath
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xxClaudesxx